ext_44432 ([identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] electricalgwen 2007-01-24 01:25 am (UTC)

This is really fabulous! Excellent character voices! I love the flow of this:
Hermione’s lips tighten. He looks away. He doesn’t want to think about Hermione’s lips, and where they have been.

This is a wonderful description:
One woven in moonlight hair, steel eyes, and edges so sharp you bleed despite yourself.

The language in this drabble is really beautiful. AND you got me to read HP, more specifically Hermione/Draco - and I LOVE Hermione/Ron. *g*

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