ext_44432 ([identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] electricalgwen 2007-09-27 05:03 am (UTC)

OMG this is so awesome! I have a huge grin on my face after reading this! It's cute and funny and fun - and the voices are awesome!

Aww, I love this Willow moment:
Willow yawned, sat up, fell over again, and groaned. “Oww. What? I had a really late night. We did a major group spell and it kind of flattened me. Start again – quietly?”

heee, this is such an awesome Buffy & Riley exchange:
“You had to bring him?”
“He kept whining.”
“Uh-huh.”
“He was sad! He doesn’t like being left alone.”

I totally can see Riley being a softie about his dog.

This is super funny:
“A completely harmless amulet not guarded by demons of any kind,” Buffy said hurriedly. Riley glared at her. Xander looked suspiciously at Riley.
“Yeah... And then there was that time he escaped and showed up in our magic circle…” Willow trailed off. Xander coughed. Riley looked askance at Xander.

The conversation between Xander and Riley is really lovely. And yay to the manipulation! heee to Roman wandering off. Awesome awesome fic!! :D

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