This was wonderful, and you nailed the voices. The dialogue was sharp and the entire piece was richly detailed and entertaining. Illyria's casual disdain and haughty reminders that she is well above their petty concerns believably shifted with "Do you look at that which disgusts you?”

Wesley didn’t answer.

“You will not look at me.”

Silence hung around them, finer than the dust in the air.

“No...” You made me feel deep sympathy for both her and Wesley's losses.

Spike was nicely annoying and hilarious. Following Angel with the laser pointer, irreverently doing exactly what Wesley wants, was delightful.

Thanks for the very entertaining read.