ext_44432 ([identity profile] cordelianne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] electricalgwen 2008-02-29 02:23 am (UTC)

Awesome! You have fantastic Illyria voice - plus awesome Spike, Angel and Wes! This really felt like it could have played out during S5 - it's like a lost scene!

heee, this is awesome. Love the exchange:
“Just about killed you to admit that, didn’t it?” Spike observed.
Wesley glared up at him. “Would it kill you to say something constructive for once?”
“Already dead.”
“You can be deader, you know.”
“Tried that. Doesn’t stick.”


This is lovely:
Her fingers clenched around the broken tile. A drop of blood splashed in the dust. “Watching slimy things crawl from the sea. And now I crawl among them.”

heee, this is awesome:
“Spike!” Angel swatted ineffectually at the light. “Wes, remember rule number four? Never give Spike any of the lab tools.”
“Of course not,” said Wesley absently. “Angel, go stand over there. No, in front of that pillar.”
Angel complied. The laser light followed him.


I love this line:
Silence hung around them, finer than the dust in the air.

Love this:
“She liked cake,” Illyria said.

Really awesome! :D

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