electricalgwen: (sx cigarette)
electricalgwen ([personal profile] electricalgwen) wrote2008-10-28 11:34 pm
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getting shirty (S/X drabble)

Inspired by the prompt "orange" at [livejournal.com profile] open_on_sunday.


Xander eventually located the parakeet-bedecked shirt draped over the back of a chair. Thank god Spike had left it alone. It was his favorite; he’d have hated to see it shrunk to doll-size.

He threw it on and realized: Spike hadn’t washed it, but he had worn it.

It smelled like cheap liquor and stolen tobacco, like the salt of tears and the metal of blood. It smelled like the forbidden.

Xander doesn’t wear the shirt anymore. He tried, once, and spent all day with an inappropriate hard-on.

Maybe he could wear it if he washed it. But he doesn’t.
cmk418: (BtVS xander)

[personal profile] cmk418 2008-10-29 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. I like the way it starts out so innocently and wanders off into a very naughty place. The description of what the shirt smelled like was perfect. Wonderful!

[identity profile] devo79.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
Great drabble :)

[identity profile] twilightofmagic.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 04:40 am (UTC)(link)
Ahh, excellent, the entire lust/love told in indirect detail.

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 02:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Very good. Xander has lust for Spike, but hasn't as yet acted on it.
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[personal profile] laisserais 2008-10-29 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
aww, sweet, in that messed up way it would be. :)

[identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Xander, he has no control over his hormones. I loved the rhythm and alliteration of this line: Maybe he could wear it if he washed it.

[identity profile] leni-ba.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh Xander. Denial cannot be good for his health, tsk tsk...

good one!
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[identity profile] mister-pointy99.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 06:28 pm (UTC)(link)
The last line is a killer!

[identity profile] persephone-20.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh! I love it!! Spander!!

[identity profile] bella240.livejournal.com 2008-10-30 05:33 am (UTC)(link)
Oh Xander very nice. Great description.
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[personal profile] shapinglight 2008-10-30 09:55 am (UTC)(link)
Terrific drabble - says all that needs to be said in 100 words and yet doesn't leave you wanting.

Wonderful.