Yeah, I don't read it either! *g* I really don't. And I hadn't planned to write fandom poetry, though I have written other stuff. I was just messing around trying to get some ideas about memory down on paper, and it ended up coming out as a poem instead of a drabble/ficlet.

I can't quite say what bothers me, actually, which is why I finally just went ahead and posted it, after looking at it *again* and changing one or two words but not finding anything else specific. There seemed something awkward in the middle but...maybe not! I appreciate your suggestion. And your kind words. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!