Yay, thanks! I actually wasn't so much worried about people being able to figure out whose POV it is, more just wondering if it was an expected thing.
I have written a short prologue. I didn't intend for it to be a prologue really, but I felt the scene was a good idea, and then realized it couldn't go anywhere other than before what I already had. Although I liked my original opening sentence. So I will probably send you that for your opinion. I have made a few logic fixes and stuff in the rest, but only in the first half and the second half is what really needs work. It has just been really intense around here and I have hardly had any time to myself, let alone writing time. *makes excuses*
I'm off for a few days now though. Need to spend time reconnecting with family, but I will definitely find some "me" time to write in as well. If I get you a revised draft by next Tuesday (the ONE WEEK deadline!) is that enough time?
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I have written a short prologue. I didn't intend for it to be a prologue really, but I felt the scene was a good idea, and then realized it couldn't go anywhere other than before what I already had. Although I liked my original opening sentence. So I will probably send you that for your opinion. I have made a few logic fixes and stuff in the rest, but only in the first half and the second half is what really needs work. It has just been really intense around here and I have hardly had any time to myself, let alone writing time. *makes excuses*
I'm off for a few days now though. Need to spend time reconnecting with family, but I will definitely find some "me" time to write in as well. If I get you a revised draft by next Tuesday (the ONE WEEK deadline!) is that enough time?
Your ICON. GAH.