Lick - X/S drabble, PG-13

[electricalgwen]

Written for the batpack International Day of Slash celebration's Drabble Tree, but I wanted to have a copy here.


Xander blinked sluggishly and realized the end credits were rolling. His lap was full of crumbs, his back had a kink in it, and his neck was strangely cool.

He turned his head slightly, and got a mouthful of stiffly gelled hair. Spike was dozing with his feet on the coffee table and his head slumped on Xander’s shoulder. He looked peaceful and ridiculously innocent, nuzzling into the hollow of Xander’s neck. Nuzzling and… moaning?

Xander leaped up in horror, unceremoniously dumping Spike on the floor and knocking the remnants of the popcorn onto him.

“Did you just lick me?!”

Comments

[entrenous88.livejournal.com]

Heee! Xander = salty goodness. :) Very cute!

[electricalgwen.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Yes, very lickable, methinks.

[iadorespike]

*Snort*...*snicker*......*LOL*

Too cute, sweetie. I never felt it coming at all. I was enjoying the image of the boys cuddled...the sweetness of it, and then...I was almost choking on a sip of my drink! *eyes you*

Well, choking aside, I liked it a lot. I'm ever amazed by how much detail can be packed in to 100 words. Congratulations on an awesome last line, too!

*hugs you*

[electricalgwen.livejournal.com]

Oops, sorry! I mean, I want to render you breathless, but perhaps not quite that way. ;)

Thanks hon!

[cordelianne.livejournal.com]

Oh yeah! This is why I love the boys!!! I love the nuzzling and moaning and Spike looking ridiculously innocent. And this is so funny:

Xander leaped up in horror, unceremoniously dumping Spike on the floor and knocking the remnants of the popcorn onto him.

“Did you just lick me?!”

[electricalgwen.livejournal.com]

Aww, thanks! I love 'em too. :)

[virtualpersonal.livejournal.com]

Ridiculously innocent... that would be Spike! Loved that line. And he licked him, heee! Very cute.

[electricalgwen.livejournal.com]

Hee, thanks!

Did you just lick me? was the line I took as a prompt in the "tree" - of course it conjured up images of Spike for me. ;)

I've read so many fics where Spike is described as cute/angelic/innocent while asleep... I'm sure he looks that way, but how ridiculous is that?? *g*