electricalgwen: (spn boysoncar)
electricalgwen ([personal profile] electricalgwen) wrote2010-05-14 09:01 am

haiku, aka SPOILER-FREE reaction post

I can't write a coda to that, at least not now - I refer you to the incredible Fleshflutter and the legendary Chash, or this wonderful 'Year of the Living Dead'.

But anyone who's seen the ending may understand the impulse that prompted me to go find this haiku I wrote some months ago at [livejournal.com profile] spnroundtable, which I'd been meaning to put up here anyway. If not, well. Enjoy anyway.


Hunting’s in their blood.
Even had Azazel not
added his blood too,

they’d have ended up
on these roads, these ghost-ridden
creature-tortured paths.

Someone has to be
the guardian, standing tall
against the shadows.

They are the blades, the
guns, the cleansing flames. They are
weapons incarnate

from earliest days,
both of them, primed and pointed,
aimed into the dark.



P.S. and/or WARNING: I do not expect/intend that comments will be kept spoiler-free.

[identity profile] dancetomato.livejournal.com 2010-05-14 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I love haiku, and this is so well done! I had to read it outloud I liked it so much.

[identity profile] electricalgwen.livejournal.com 2010-05-14 10:07 pm (UTC)(link)
<3 So glad you liked it!

Psst - I'll probably be online tonight? In a couple of hours.

[identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com 2010-05-14 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
That's beautiful. The next to the last haiku sings.

[identity profile] electricalgwen.livejournal.com 2010-05-14 10:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!