Oh wow! I'm all teary. I love what you did with the prompt! As the other commenter notes, it's very poetic.
I love how you utilized the phrases we're so used "Into every generation.." and "weight of the world". This is so sad and makes me all teary: But the lie had already molded her irrevocably, driving her to fight and sacrifice continually until there was nothing left inside. Until the day – she lost.
I love the the statement of "Good times", it's so loaded with meanings. And I adore how you describe the kiss. Lovely drabble!! *g*
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Date: 2006-06-23 02:42 am (UTC)I love how you utilized the phrases we're so used "Into every generation.." and "weight of the world". This is so sad and makes me all teary:
But the lie had already molded her irrevocably, driving her to fight and sacrifice continually until there was nothing left inside. Until the day – she lost.
I love the the statement of "Good times", it's so loaded with meanings. And I adore how you describe the kiss. Lovely drabble!! *g*